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Zombie Bizzle
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 Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:19 pm Post subject: Unnamed CIS Fighter |
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This is my first vehicle MOC. I made it using the pieces from General Grievous star fighter. It is a multi purpose star fighter capable of bombing and dog fighting. So if you guys would like you can help me name the ship.
Birds Eye View:
Side View:
Bottom View:
You can see more pics of the fighter on my Photostream. Tell me what you think could be done it improve it ect please. |
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Zombie147
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Joined: 27 Jan 2007
Location: Boston, MA
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| Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:33 pm Post subject: |
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| Um...sorry for my frankness, but it kinda looks like you just took the wings off a General Grevious Starfighter. I'd work on making it more individual. |
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Zombie Bizzle
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| Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:36 pm Post subject: |
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| Zombie147 wrote: |
| Um...sorry for my frankness, but it kinda looks like you just took the wings off a General Grevious Starfighter. I'd work on making it more individual. |
I did more then take the wings off dude. I reworked the main body( I took of the thing that held the wings in place) and I redid the bottom. But thanks for telling me that. I might make a v.2. |
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ZombieEighty-Oh
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Location: Cold and rainy New York
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Zombie Bizzle
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| Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:41 pm Post subject: |
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| ZombieEighty-Oh wrote: |
Looks nice; perhaps a bit too sleek?
As for a name, how about a Bellabub Mk. 2?  |
You saying I should make it rougher? And if so would that be like removing the things by the cockpit or what?
Hmm nice name... |
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Zombie Bizzle
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| Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 7:04 pm Post subject: |
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Ok I made a v.2 I'll upload and post the pics later this evening/tomorrow if I get the chance. Here is a brief description of what i did:
I removed the piece that is on the top of the ship in front of the cockpit. I then took the one from the bottom and reattached the two of the to the sides as gun/wings.
Like I said pics will be up soon. |
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Zombie Bizzle
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| Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 7:19 pm Post subject: |
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| Scratch that I don't like v.2. I'm leaving it how it was... |
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ZombieEighty-Oh
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Zombie Bizzle
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| Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 7:33 pm Post subject: |
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| So attach the wings back by the cockpit? And yea I could make a bomb bay in a way on it. Thanks for the idea 80-0. I always new you were a good guy..even though you dropped my sandwiches. |
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