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An Imperial Christmas

 
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General Veers



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PostPosted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:30 pm    Post subject: An Imperial Christmas Reply with quote

Every year, Imperial High Command delivers whatever the troopers want. This way they can ensure loyalty of the troops.



Deeplinks:

Trooper bob got a sentient baseball bat.

The tree is topped with a vader helmet

The vig without the figs

Trooper steve got himself a frog.

A closeup of the titan.

A random shot.

Enjoy! I hope to fix it up before submitting it to the contest.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 10:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Its a good start, but it needs more Christmas elements. The tree could use some lights, maybe a few presents under it, and it all seems so gray. Add some color in there, and it will look pretty good. Smile
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 11:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Greyish theme is Imperial. Smile

Not bad.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 11:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

First off, what is the significance of the titan? It doesnt seem to do anything for the MOC and is kinda awkward, second of all your "deeplinks" are not deeplinks at all, just links Wink

I definitely think this could use some more work on "christmasification" but good start Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

My main problem, it seems a tad crowded. Mostly it's the robot (which i think is very random to have in there) Is it suppost to be a gift Confused
And I agree, the tree could use a bit of decorations, but besides all that it's a good start.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 02, 2008 7:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So I should remove the robot and light up the tree?
I'll see what I can do!
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well i think you should take something out, it is abit over crowded. To me the robot seems like the least important part.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 02, 2008 11:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You could always expand it to 12 x 12, that might make it less crowded.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 03, 2008 6:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Flynn, that's a great idea. I didn't even notice that the base was smaller then 12x12. If you increase it to 12x12, you could fit everything in more comfertably, and possibly even add in some more things if you please.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 03, 2008 10:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Emperor wrote:
I definitely think this could use some more work on "christmasification" but good start Smile


I agree. I think that the tree could look a little less like bamboo, and maybe there should be some unopened present boxes in there. Other than that it's fine. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 7:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've enlarged it to 10x10, and I should have pics up soon.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 2:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry for the wait, but I just couldn't force myself to put up pics...
Also, I'm sorry about the lighting. It's been overcast here since mid-november.



my ripoff of hamlet.

It's bad when your only friend is a frog.
Not too bad of course, just bad.

Moved around a bit...

More christmas-y goodness.

And the rest of the shots aren't that important. Let me know what you think!
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