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Unnamed CIS Fighter

 
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Zombie Bizzle
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:19 pm    Post subject: Unnamed CIS Fighter Reply with quote

This is my first vehicle MOC. I made it using the pieces from General Grievous star fighter. It is a multi purpose star fighter capable of bombing and dog fighting. So if you guys would like you can help me name the ship.


Birds Eye View:





Side View:



Bottom View:





You can see more pics of the fighter on my Photostream. Tell me what you think could be done it improve it ect please.
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Zombie147
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Um...sorry for my frankness, but it kinda looks like you just took the wings off a General Grevious Starfighter. I'd work on making it more individual.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Zombie147 wrote:
Um...sorry for my frankness, but it kinda looks like you just took the wings off a General Grevious Starfighter. I'd work on making it more individual.


I did more then take the wings off dude. I reworked the main body( I took of the thing that held the wings in place) and I redid the bottom. But thanks for telling me that. I might make a v.2.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks nice; perhaps a bit too sleek?

As for a name, how about a Bellabub Mk. 2? Wink
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Zombie Bizzle
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ZombieEighty-Oh wrote:
Looks nice; perhaps a bit too sleek?

As for a name, how about a Bellabub Mk. 2? Wink



You saying I should make it rougher? And if so would that be like removing the things by the cockpit or what?

Hmm nice name...
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Zombie Bizzle
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 7:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok I made a v.2 I'll upload and post the pics later this evening/tomorrow if I get the chance. Here is a brief description of what i did:

I removed the piece that is on the top of the ship in front of the cockpit. I then took the one from the bottom and reattached the two of the to the sides as gun/wings.


Like I said pics will be up soon.
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Zombie Bizzle
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 7:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Scratch that I don't like v.2. I'm leaving it how it was...
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 7:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'd say make wings but put them in the rear, and plant the guns somewhere on that. Also, try to make a bomb bay in that chunky hull!
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 7:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

So attach the wings back by the cockpit? And yea I could make a bomb bay in a way on it. Thanks for the idea 80-0. I always new you were a good guy..even though you dropped my sandwiches.
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