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Zombie Fett Destroyed!

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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:17 pm Post subject: Rapid Scout |
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Been feeling the need to make some steampunk lately, so while my larger steampunk MOC is going to take a while, I made this little thing. Took be a little less then an hour to make. (this isn't steampunk. Gosh no, I have no idea what it is anymore.)
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C&C much appreciated. _________________ Oh, signatures are so over rated. =D
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ZombieSolo ... eats you all. [zMOD]

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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:25 pm Post subject: |
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Nothing about this says steampunk to me, but the propellers made me think it was some sort of minisub.
It's a good shape and all, but it looks like it could be more of a micro fighter than anything steam related. |
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Zombie Dragon Destroyed!

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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:46 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, steampunk implies steam engine, which usually involves a broiler, gears, tubes, and, of course, steam. It also should be reminiscent of the late 19th century Victorian era. This think looks a little too sleek and well-put-together for steampunk. _________________
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Zombie Fett Destroyed!

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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:57 pm Post subject: |
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Meh, you guys are so nit picky. I suppose it's not totally steampunk but, hey, I wanted to build something. _________________ Oh, signatures are so over rated. =D
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Zombie Dragon Destroyed!

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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:45 pm Post subject: |
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Well, it's good, just don't go putting false labels on it. _________________
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Zombie147 Undead!

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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:03 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, or we'll hit you. |
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Zombie Dragon Destroyed!

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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:42 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, now for some actual criticism:
I think the one flaw with this is the back. Maybe try to bulk it up a little, right now it just looks like some sort of water raft. Try to build the area around the antenna up a couple brick heights. Everything else looks good, the sides, the cockpit, the back. It just looks a little squished to me. _________________
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Scitvs Praetor Nerdivs

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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:56 pm Post subject: |
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Well, however one categorizes it, I really like this little craft. It's small, sleek, and grey, which make it high on my like list. I really like the little antenna, too. Looks like a fun little moc. Good work! _________________
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KungZombie ZOMGpire!

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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:16 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, steampunk implies steam engine, which usually involves a broiler, gears, tubes, and, of course, steam. |
Teehee, broiler power. _________________
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General Veers

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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 8:32 am Post subject: |
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I'd suggest some more powerful looking engines. Bulk it up, thow in bigger props, and you'll have a nice looking ship. _________________ Raptor Fun Fact #73- The raptor's natural enemy is the gas-powered internal combustion off-road vehicle, which is made of evil.
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Zombie Dragon Destroyed!

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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 5:03 pm Post subject: |
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Curses! My one weakness revealed! I can never differentiate between boiler and broiler.  _________________
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Zombie Fett Destroyed!

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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 7:01 pm Post subject: |
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Heh, not like I ever really make my MOC's better. Going to need the parts from this for my airship. >.>
Thanks for the comments though. _________________ Oh, signatures are so over rated. =D
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