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custom star wars creature...taun taun...

 
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boses



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PostPosted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 4:13 pm    Post subject: custom star wars creature...taun taun... Reply with quote

Here is a little Star Wars moc...The moc is a taun taun and rider from ESB...








Thank you, and please tell me what you think...
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knapplZ
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 4:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very interesting. A lot of this is really good. I would suggest making it taller, with a longer torso mostly. The head, legs, arms & tail seem about right, but the body is just too stubby.
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boses



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PostPosted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 5:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I tried lengthening the torso, as suggested. I like the original proportions better...any other thoughts?
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The taun-taun looks really good, but the rider looks like he's being thrown off. Other than that, nice work!
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it's a great start, but rather than making the torso longer, I would make the legs longer. Tauntauns have got big powerful legs and little arms - the arms here are currently twice as long as the legs!

And try turning the saddle piece around, that way the fig can lean forwards a bit and stop that falling off look Smile

The rest looks great and I love the way you've done the head (*snaffles ideas away for future builds*) Very Happy
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